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1. Technical

2. Composition

3. Impact

4. Commercial Viability

Rate each image on the above categories on a scale from 1 to 10. Write a paragraph about each category.

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24 Responses to “Triptych Period Five”


  1. March 10, 2009 at 4:36 pm

    Technical: 9
    Colors are very distinct and vivid. I like the blues in the photo – it seems so pure and looks so clear. Yet, still not overwhelming or distracting.

    Composition: 8
    The clouds and sky seem to be balanced well. The clouds don’t crowd the sky, and the sky doesn’t crowd the clouds.

    Impact: 7
    Not exactly an eye catcher, but the more I look at it, the more I like it. I don’t think it does a great job of grabbing your attention, but not all photos need to in order to be effective. I like how it’s more subtle.

    Commercial Viability: 9
    It really plays on my emotions as it encourages peacefulness, so i think it has great commercial potential. People want something pleasing and not distracting for things such as calendar’s, greeting cards, etc…

    Grade 8.25/10 as seen in

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  2. March 10, 2009 at 12:47 pm

    Technical: 7
    I think the photo has really good color, and i like the brightness.

    Composition: 8
    Its a really good picture but I find the top picture distracting, the trees are really nice but it bothers me I dont really know why.

    Impact: 8
    This picture hit me pretty hard. I find the colors impacting.

    Commercial Viability: 5
    I dont know how it would work for a comerical.
    it would be a good poster to put in a dentists office though.

    Grade 7/10 as seen in

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  3. 3 Kurtis
    March 10, 2009 at 12:37 pm

    Technical: 7
    i think the sky look sreally great, like a clear sunny day. And the framing is very good too, the pictures almost look together but they are not…

    Composition: 6
    I think the angles are really good, but i wish one of the pictures had maybe a little more in them.

    Impact: 7
    i think its a great eye cather. it gives me alot or emotion. nice days put me in good moods.

    Commercial Viability: 8
    i think when it comes to this picture being put on a wall it would fit in great.

    Grade 7/10 as seen in

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  4. 4 holliecayton
    March 10, 2009 at 12:35 pm

    Technical: 9
    I love all three photos, i love how they all got put together and how they all fit and make the same subject look different.

    Composition: 8
    I believe that the composition is how the put the twigs or some sort of plant or something closer than the clouds, shouwing just how far they are away from the clouds.

    Impact: 7
    It’s not the best, i love the idea of the clouds overlapping and how the sky it’s kind of a dark blue.

    Commercial Viability: 9
    I could definatly see this going somewhere though. I could see it in a magazine type things along with a certain artical.

    Grade 8.25/10 as seen in

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  5. 5 tiffany yanoupeth
    March 10, 2009 at 11:47 am

    Technical: 8
    I really like how the colors are very vivid, but not to overwelming so that it’s too bright.

    Composition: 8
    I like how rule of thirds is used, but i think that the tree on the left could have been cropped out.

    Impact: 6
    I think that the thing that will last with me is the color that is coming from the sky and how it’s so blue.

    Commercial Viability: 7
    I can see this like on a book cover that has to do with dreams or looking past the bad.

    Grade 7.25/10 as seen in

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  6. March 10, 2009 at 11:43 am

    Technical: 10
    the clouds and everything are asome looking.

    Composition: 5
    good composition.

    Impact: 9
    I get a good happy feeling when I see this photo.

    Commercial Viability: 8
    can be used for like fly high or something like that.

    Grade 8/10 as seen in

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  7. 7 Brittany Noftsger
    March 10, 2009 at 11:31 am

    Technical: 6
    I really like how all of the blues are connected throughout all three pictures. I also like the defined edge of the clouds.

    Composition:4
    the one thing i really dont like is the top of the trees in the photo. They are really out of place.

    Impact:4
    I dont think this is a photo i will remember becasue all of the photos are focusing on the clouds. There could be more objects that connected to make it more interesting.

    Commercial Viability:3

    I dont see this photo in a comercial setting at all.

  8. March 10, 2009 at 11:31 am

    Technical: 9
    I loved the coloring as is. My tiny complaint? The edging around some of those perfect white fluffy clouds is on the dark side. When I dont believe it should be.

    Composition: 6
    I find the branches to be rather annoying. Perhaps because there arent any located in the other two as well. It just throws things off balance.

    Impact: 5
    Its pretty decent, but then again…who cant help but stare at mis-shapen, and irregular clouds plastered against brilliant blue?

    Commercial Viability: 4
    I wouldve preffered to see clouds with a tad more bang and a little less poof.

    Grade 6/10 as seen in

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  9. March 10, 2009 at 11:31 am

    Technical: 9
    I think the lighting is just about as perfect as you can get it. I realllllly like it!

    Composition: 8
    I really enjoy the angles, because they really stand out to me and I like how the picture was taken.

    Impact: 10
    Yes, honestly I do think that I will remember this photo because my favorite thing to take picture of is the sky, and these pictures are of the clouds and I really like it!

    Commercial Viability: 7
    I see this picture being in a calendar to be honest!

    Grade 8.5/10 as seen in

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  10. 10 Carly Ford
    March 10, 2009 at 11:29 am

    Technical: 7
    I like the vibrant colors that the sky has with the combination of the clouds.

    Composition: 6
    The balance between the clouds and the sky is nice. It’s very appealing to the eye.

    Impact: 5
    To me personally, this photo doesn’t have that much of an impact on me.

    Commercial Viability: 5
    I would see this in a add about brightening someone’s day.. Maybe an allergy drug as well.

    Grade 5.75/10 as seen in

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